Thursday, May 14, 2009

Short story- final

Three days ago I was sitting at home on the computer like a loser, doing my homework for stupid language arts class. What was I thinking? How could I possibly do nothing, when I could be doing this? My heart was racing as I flew by cars on the turnpike. Garmin says I’m only 3.4 miles away, a mere ten minutes. It seemed like forever. Scott was getting anxious as well; he started to talk and not shut up. Eventually I told him he would walk home if he didn’t shut it. The towering white mountain opened up from the end of the tunnel. It was gorgeous, like nothing I had ever seen before. Perking my ride was nothing new, but yet, this feeling I had was something beyond description. I was finally on my own away from everything, getting ready to have the time of my life. With Scott as my witness, I was indestructible. My enthusiasm showed as I gleefully approached the ticket window. The attractive teller behind the window seemed like a cheerful person. Since I was in such a good mood, I sustained a short conversation with her, until the people in line behind me started to get pushy. I told her we’d chat later (it turns out she was in the food line later on when I got dinner). Strapping on my skis was amazing. With a simple step and click, I went from being the lonely computer dwelling loser, to the mountain conquering ski master. My next obstacle; the lift. It couldn’t be as easy as just sitting down when it comes and standing up when its time to get off, could it? Oh but it was. At that moment I was on top of the world. The lodge was a tiny speck and I was the iron giant. Standing in awe, cold air rushed through my hair. The smell of fresh, minty pine complimented the beautiful view of the wilderness. With my boots wedged in the snow, a shiver took over my body. This is was a place of peacefulness and tranquility. Never before had I been so close with nature. Facing north was the lush green forest. To the left and right, only the powdery white snow was visible. While looking up, I caught a glimpse of the old ski lift, the single lift which was my passport to this great adventure. All that could be heard was the sweet chirping of birds nestled upon tree branches. "This is indeed a moment to remember," I thought to myself. Being that close to nature could put anyone in a state of supreme happiness. As I stood admiring the clear blue sky and the world around me, I was interrupted by my friends' constant taunting, "Come on, let's go!" They were not rookies to this game we call skiing. They had experienced the atmosphere around the sport and were not as enthusiastic toward the surroundings as I was. Their calls became louder, the annoyance increasing. I stepped up to the edge of this immense slope. The steepness of this colossal block of snow was frightening. The only way to go was down. I took a deep breath with no worries, for this was not the first time I was confronted with a suicide mission. In a heartbeat, the exhilarating feeling of going downhill on a pair of thin skis took over. The breeze rushed through my hair and flowed vigorously. Veering left and right, dodging trees and large rocks, and racing with my buddies at the same time was truly a thrilling experience, although extremely dangerous. Flying down a slope at fifty miles and hour, I felt as if I could leap up and fly away just like an eagle taking off. At that minute I determined that this would be my new passion. 

2 comments:

  1. I like this a lot Luke. Your personal voice in the paper makes it much more fun to read. I also really like how you wrote about Scott and his big mouth. :P

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  2. I enjoyed reading your paper. I think that you have great organization and your story is easy to read. I also like your use of personal voice. this makes it a lot more interesting and fun to read. I also thought your focus was strong. I always knew what you were talking about a you did venture off.

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